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Stuck Together

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Description

Acrylic on canvas.
It was just a quick painting I did to have something hanging on my wall.
Image size
3297x2580px 1.65 MB
Make
SAMSUNG
Model
SAMSUNG ES70, ES71 / VLUU ES70, ES71 / SAMSUNG SL600
Shutter Speed
1/54 second
Aperture
F/12.6
Focal Length
9 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Mar 11, 2012, 12:11:43 AM
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jbbrandi's avatar
Haha, I like this!
I feel like the green bit on the blue man's face seems a bit awkward, just anatomically speaking (and let's be honest here--is this really shooting for that sort of realism? No), but when you don't look closely at it, it works compositionally.
The faces on the end are what make me laugh a bit at it. They seem a bit dazed and as though they aren't exactly...bright. Meanwhile, the eye in the middle looks like it's bored and rather frustrated and exasperated--irritated to have to be the glue holding these two dunces together.
The angles and shapes work overall, but the body of the one on the left, I think, might benefit from sharper corners; it'd feel more cohesive that way.
The only other thing is the drippings. I love them, I think it works really well with the feel of the piece, but I think there should be more of them. Possibly in the top left and the bottom right, coming off of the blue face. It would add texture and context for the faces, and while they speak for themselves rather well, I think adding more drippings would kind of make it more...I want to say dynamic, but I don't know if that's the right word.
Anyway, I really like this. I love the colour of the middle "face" and the similarities between all three eyes--and the fact that there are three eyes and not two.
(and obviously, anything I've said are just silly suggestions that are of my personal opinion, which is already rather highly positive on this piece. so I'm offering my two tiny cents just as some feedback.)